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Juan R.

Hey Colleen,

I just finished reading your group blog. There are so many interesting points throughout your essay that it is hard to critique it. Let me start by saying that your use of evidence and factual documents is obviously present. This blog has very good transitional sentences. Some of the points in the argument, however, incorporate some opinions that are objective. You state that the use of social classes is not as prominet as it was back in the 19th century. To tell you the truth, I'm not too sure that this is true. I honestly believe that we have even more of that type of classification today than we ever had before. But again, thats just my opinion lol. Your group also stated that racism and prejudice is not as prominent as it was before. I think that you're right. Yet, at the same time, I also think that people today are more prone to hide what they really feel about other races so as to not seem like a racist to society. The argument was precise and backed up with many facts. The blog was not cluttered or messy so it made the reading very easy. Keep up the good work.

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