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Juan

Hey Collen (and gang),

I just finished reading your blog. I thought you guys did great with transitional sentences, thesis statement, and research. Your citation to the book fits well with the rest of the paragraph it is included in. It took me a very long time to find mistakes in this blog by I managed to find three. In the 1st sentence of the 3d paragraph, you started the sentence with the word "they" when I'm sure you meant "the" or perhaps even "their." Next, in the 3d sentence of the same paragraph, you forgot to add the suffix "ed" after the word "establish" i.e. (established). Finally, the hardest error to find, you might of wanted to put a comma after the word "majority" in the 4th sentence of the 4th paragraph. Great job guys....

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